Tuesday, 28 May 2019

lunch time

5 comments:

  1. Hi Monty
    great post you had great detail but there was 1 thing i noticed that when you said the whole school goes out you spelled whole like hole but apart from that it was great.

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  2. Hi monty
    That was a great post I liked how you added lots of detail. was the picture were awesome but maybe you could write a bit more cose on your blog lots of your blog posts are slides so maybe you could do a wevide or a doc. but without those messages that was a great blog post.

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  3. Hi Monty
    great post i really liked what you did it about
    you had great detail but i noticed there was no learning intention overall it was great

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  4. Hi Monty
    good post. but is really short so maybe next time for your next slide show, add more stuff in it but for now it ok.

    From Rachel Kim

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  5. Hi Monty,
    GREAT! post I really like how you added detail to your writing. Next time you could use a little bit less pictures, but otherwise I really enjoyed reading it but there's one more thing it would be really cool if you thought out of the box and did a wevideo, but it was great in the end seeya bye

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