Thursday, 20 June 2019

not a story again

5 comments:

  1. Hi Zonty Monty,
    Interesting post I liked the awkwardness on the story but it was really hard to follow.
    Next time you could put a capital for the title of your blog post.

    Funny post!

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  2. hi minty monty this was a really funny cringe story but i was really cool too.

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  3. Hi Monty

    please add more slides because it was quite boring even though it's GOOD

    bye

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  4. Hi monty
    I really liked your post and the way how you added all the photos and detail to it but maybe next time you should check your punctuation apart from that it was great.

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  5. Hi Monty
    I think your post is funny but it was really weird and it needs to be longer. There are capital letters missing and some in the wrong place. But I still it was funny.
    From Charlotte

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