Hi Monty, Cool post I like how you detailed your writing well. But some of the language you used was a bit slack. Maybe next time you could make your post a bit longer.
Hi monty good blog post I like how you told us about the people the not so nice town and the dog but can you give us stuff about the people and the dog I know you said read the book but tell us more please
Hi Monty
ReplyDeleteI like that you added what the book was about, and that you added pictures. You could proof read and edit tho.
Have a great day.
Phoenix.
Hi Monty,
ReplyDeleteCool post I like how you detailed your writing well.
But some of the language you used was a bit slack.
Maybe next time you could make your post a bit longer.
Cool post!
hi monty good post
ReplyDeleteHey monty I loved your blog post I thought that you describe the plot perfectly there is nothing that I would change.
ReplyDeletehi monty i liked your blog post there is nothing i would change good job>:)
ReplyDeleteHi Monty
ReplyDeletei really like you blog.
I don't think that i have to really change anything.
i think it's good
From Rachel Kim
Hi Monty
ReplyDeleteNice post!I liked how you told us about the book and the people.It sounds great next time maybe tell us more about the characters.
Bye
Ollie
Hi monty
ReplyDeletegood blog post I like how you told us about the people the not so nice town and the dog but can you give us stuff about the people and the dog I know you said read the book but tell us more please
have a nice day
Anton