Wednesday, 25 September 2019

my holidays

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my holidays  

25/09/2019
in the holidays my parents were working but my dad did work at home so sometimes i had had to go to places. On the first day i went to a piha camp place? (i forgot the name?) Some of my friends went to the camp.


A couple days later i went to okk and we all went to the asb showgrounds to go on heaps of fun activities. Another couple days later i had a sleepover at ollies house and kingston was there to. That was it because the holidays went quick

2 comments:

  1. Hi Monty
    great post except the punctuation, and I can tell that you did not proofread it. Other than that it is a good post.
    Have a great day.
    Phoenix.

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  2. you forgot about me in shcool when you were at okk

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